Read the selection and choose the best answer to each
question.
Ivy wrote the following paper about her first experience with
painting. Read Ivy’s draft and look for revisions she needs to make.
Then answer the questions that follow.
My Masterpiece
(1) I had always wanted to try one of those guided painting classes.
(2) So when our library decided to offer such a class, I told my
friend Ella, and we both signed up.
(3) On the big day, we entered the library’s community room and
saw that it had been transformed into a makeshift art studio.
(4) Small easels, each holding a blank canvas, stood on folding
tables. (5) A paper plate topped with huge, glistening dabs of red,
yellow, white, and blue paint was next to each easel. (6) Our first
assignment was to paint a white vase of cheerful yellow sunflowers
against a blue background. (7) I wanted to snag seats directly in
front of the instructor, thinking I might be able to copy her strokes.
(8) I quickly herded Ella to the front of the room.
(9) We were asked to paint our canvas blue. (10) It was easy to
follow the artist’s sweeping, back-and-forth motions, and although I
had never painted before, I could tell I was a natural. (11) I started
thinking about where I would hang my new masterpiece.
(12) Almost immediately after that, however, I began to run into
serious issues. (13) The first curved line of my vase looked perfect,
but when I went to paint the line that would form the opposite
half of the vase, my hand slipped. (14) I tried to cover the jagged
white streak with blue paint. (15) To my horror it remained visible
beneath the blue.
(16) The instructor continued talking. (17) While I fussed with my
chaos, she explained how to paint the sunflower leaves. (18) Things
went downhill fast after that. (19) My leaves looked like fat, green
caterpillars. (20) My numerous attempts to fix them just made
them worse. (21) My stems were crooked, and when I failed to
thoroughly clean my paintbrush, my sunflowers took on a greenish
tint. (22) Feeling frustrated, I snuck a glance at everyone else’s
paintings; I was mortified.
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