Converting First and Second to Third Person
Definitions
First Person Voice:
• Words like I, me, my, ours, and we
• Used to tell personal stories
• Useful for the reader to see into the writer’s thoughts and feel the writer’s emotions
Second Person Voice:
• Words like you and your
• Used to directly address the reader, especially when giving directions
• Useful for the language of everyday life and creating a bond between the writer and the reader
Third Person Voice:
• Words like he, she, they, person, one, and descriptive words like author, reader, player
• Used in most formal academic writing
• Useful for the writer to maintain an all-knowing, unbiased perspective
Converting
Most writing assignments at the college level should be written in third person unless otherwise specified by
the professor. However, because first and second person are the voices used during everyday life, it is easy
to use them while writing. To convert a paper into the formal third person voice of academic writing, follow
these steps:
1. Read through the paper watching for first or second person words. Also watch for personal stories
that might require the use of first person. Mark these words with a highlighter or pen.
2. Return to any marked words. Are they phrases like “I think” or “I believe” that could be eliminated
completely?
Ex: I think Dallas Baptist University is a great school.
Revised ex: Dallas Baptist University is a great school.
3. Could any words that cannot be eliminated become third person words? Can “I” become “one,” or
“my” to “a person’s” or “you” to “a teacher”?
Ex: You should make sure your students all have pencils before handing out tests.
Revised ex: A teacher should make sure his or her students all have pencils before handing
out tests.
4. If there are still personal stories included that cannot be taken out or changed, can they be
converted into hypothetical stories, or is there an author in the research that has a similar example?
Ex: When I was little, I was bitten by a dog, and now I am afraid of them.
Revised ex: Many children are bitten by dogs at a young age, leading to adults who fear these
household pets.