Straight Sentences and Persuasive Prepositional Phrases
You can often choose whether to begin or end your sentence with your prepositional phrase.
• If you place the prepositional phrase at the beginning of your sentence, it becomes a
dependent clause and needs a comma to separate it from the independent clause. In that
position, the prepositional phrase also emphasizes its object in a way that colors the reader’s
perception of the independent clause.
• If you place the prepositional phrase at the end of your sentence, it does not require a
comma because it simply completes the main idea of the independent clause.
o Beginning: Aside from the question of trademarks, we need to address one or
two issues
o End: We need to address one or two issues aside from the question of
trademarks.
o Beginning: As far as I know, the summons has not yet been served.
o End: The summons has not yet been served as far as I know.
o Beginning: In lieu of payment, the employee will receive vacation time.
o End: The employee shall receive vacation time in lieu of payment.
Cutting Unnecessary Prepositional Phrases
Be aware of overwriting or adding unnecessary words into your prepositional phrases. Always prefer
efficiency and precision unless trying to obfuscate or hide information.
• “In order to” can simply be “to.”
• “During the course of” can simply be “during”
• “On a monthly basis” can simply be “monthly.”
• “Concerning the matter of” can simply be “about.”
• Also consider rewriting “of” phrases as possessives to remove unnecessary verbiage:
o “The verdict of the jury” could simply be “The jury’s verdict.”
o “The behavior of the defendant” could simply be “the defendant’s behavior.”